The Reincarnated Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Thread

[Pathless]

I drove it so fast
no one saw the stop light
or me blurring by

[Dream]

Middle pseudo-haiku lines in this thread so far listed by Author:

AHANU
quieting chaotic minds
ask the wind, wave, bird, or clock,
psychology of ancient
Freewilly! handstand over

CHINA_CAT_SUNFLOWER
Come, my lovely mosquito
dancing shadows, council drums

DREAM
visible secret language
-ese, is a language to please
thus your trouble was for naught?
the letter returned unread
what are little boys made of
that's the only reason why

FLOWPERSON
twinkling in the midnight sky
call to spirits in the sky
humid heat in Mexico
departing the rust bound past

GATEKEEPER
perfect truth and binding ties
beat boldly with perfect love
to humanity as whole
how do you like dem apples
psychedelic master of
are the weeds of yesterday
stand upon a moonlit shore

GREYMARE
because INLOVE is the way
breathing on the moon and tide
I feel your love sent to me
i think ive had too much rum
happening in the nation
together in spirit, but
sweethearts hold hands in the light
in triplicate please madam
stockpiling meat cos they can
reflect freedom on the wing
heavy metal, blues and punk
banged up toes and dirty chins
and a path of mud in house

JACK_HALYARD
Till vernal splendor arrives
Neptune's children are singing

JOEDJR
held in Love and Mercy find

NETTI-NETTI
a time reborn for a transformed heart

PATHLESS
picking up cosmic sparkles
rain rain rain shhhh earth so soaked
days in the wink of a young
volcanoes shuffle surface
spider's threads, grandma spider
gives up the competitive
hunting into the dustbin
muy bien buttery rum
imagination mushrooms
mad hatter eatin' cabbage
my roots go deep and deeper
when playing ping-pong maintain
koo-koo kachoo and into
and our creativity
and tired old boredoms dripping
salt tides water high swamping
ask why. I drink Sam Adams
Lucy, I'm home; Rolling Stones:
or methamphetamines? Hey
marbles, books, glass, roots, sweetgrass,
broken toys, barney rubble,
no one saw the stop light


PHYLLIS_SIDHE_UAINE
Roses perfume quiet air

SEATTLEGAL
dancing throughout the cosmos
a sympathetic dance of
liberty through love: truth frees
spreading a blanket over

SNOOPY
brief wave across the ocean

TAO_EQUUS
in their metaphors and rhymes

[Dream]

or me blurring by
think of what its like to fly
time equals distance

[Pathless]

Originally Posted by Dream

Middle pseudo-haiku lines in this thread so far listed by Author:

AHANU
quieting chaotic minds
ask the wind, wave, bird, or clock,
psychology of ancient
Freewilly! handstand over

CHINA_CAT_SUNFLOWER
Come, my lovely mosquito
dancing shadows, council drums

DREAM
visible secret language
-ese, is a language to please
thus your trouble was for naught?
the letter returned unread
what are little boys made of
that's the only reason why

FLOWPERSON
twinkling in the midnight sky
call to spirits in the sky
humid heat in Mexico
departing the rust bound past

GATEKEEPER
perfect truth and binding ties
beat boldly with perfect love
to humanity as whole
how do you like dem apples
psychedelic master of
are the weeds of yesterday
stand upon a moonlit shore

GREYMARE
because INLOVE is the way
breathing on the moon and tide
I feel your love sent to me
i think ive had too much rum
happening in the nation
together in spirit, but
sweethearts hold hands in the light
in triplicate please madam
stockpiling meat cos they can
reflect freedom on the wing
heavy metal, blues and punk
banged up toes and dirty chins
and a path of mud in house

JACK_HALYARD
Till vernal splendor arrives
Neptune's children are singing

JOEDJR
held in Love and Mercy find

NETTI-NETTI
a time reborn for a transformed heart

PATHLESS
picking up cosmic sparkles
rain rain rain shhhh earth so soaked
days in the wink of a young
volcanoes shuffle surface
spider's threads, grandma spider
gives up the competitive
hunting into the dustbin
muy bien buttery rum
imagination mushrooms
mad hatter eatin' cabbage
my roots go deep and deeper
when playing ping-pong maintain
koo-koo kachoo and into
and our creativity
and tired old boredoms dripping
salt tides water high swamping
ask why. I drink Sam Adams
Lucy, I'm home; Rolling Stones:
or methamphetamines? Hey
marbles, books, glass, roots, sweetgrass,
broken toys, barney rubble,
no one saw the stop light


PHYLLIS_SIDHE_UAINE
Roses perfume quiet air

SEATTLEGAL
dancing throughout the cosmos
a sympathetic dance of
liberty through love: truth frees
spreading a blanket over

SNOOPY
brief wave across the ocean

TAO_EQUUS
in their metaphors and rhymes

Ha! Thanks for that, Dream.

[Pathless]

time equals distance,
distance runner, what's the time?
It's time to get ill.

[Ahanu]

It's time to get ill.
As Mum would say, "don't worry,"
when boys construct ill.

[Pathless]

when boys construct ill
intentions we must pull the
perspective higher

[greymare]

perspective higher
start off small and grow up tall
whats it like to want?

[Netti-Netti]

whats it like to want?
listening for the anthem, I know
there is no ungetting it once it has been got

[Pathless]

Originally Posted by pseudonymous

Pseudo Haiku = the only structure rule is they must be 3 lines of 5-7-5 syllables per line...topic can be anything of your choice.

The Chain= you must begin your pseudo-haiku using the last line of the poem before as the first line in your's.

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there is no unget-
ing it once it has been got
forgetting, forgot

[greymare]

forgetting, forgot
old timers disease, i have
too young? i think not

[Dream]

too young? I think not
pink bird on a ladder rung
ages & ink blotts

[Pathless]

ages & ink blotts
bottles and plastic angels
landscapes of gadgets

[Jack Halyard]

Landscapes of gadgets
Come in all sizes and shapes.
Where's the OFF button?

[Pathless]

Where's the OFF button?
Found it in a neglected
person: me. Power.