The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain - Page 3

pohaikawahine · 11-03-2005, 05:10 AM

lowers head and sighs
tears begin to form and drop
the flood begins soon

Ciel · 11-03-2005, 12:21 PM

The flood begins soon
Clouds rise high, enter sky space
Laughter falls on earth

dauer · 11-03-2005, 01:36 PM

laughter falls on earth
colored leaves falling to earth
Autumn winds blow them

Ciel · 11-03-2005, 02:16 PM

Autumn winds blow them
Spectral radiance unbound
Illumination

pseudonymous · 11-03-2005, 04:44 PM

illumination
the moment held forever
my heart missed a beat

Ciel · 11-03-2005, 05:25 PM

My heart missed a beat
Magnificent magnitude
Immeasurable bliss

Awaiting_the_fifth · 11-04-2005, 10:28 AM

Immeasurable bliss
3 - nil uefa cup win
Middlesbrough FC ................... (sorry, I had to)

pseudonymous · 11-04-2005, 12:01 PM

awaiting the fifth...where is your mind? that was way off on syllables, and let's face it...a thread killer. since i started the thread, i vote to return to ceil's pseudo-haiku:

My heart missed a beat
Magnificent magnitude
Immeasurable bliss

Ciel · 11-04-2005, 01:47 PM

But interesting P,

Awaiting the fifth why do these words create football reaction, when you seek the peace and the equisite.

If I may I'll rearrange;

Middlesbrough FC
Zen mind game, equisite form
Immeasurable bliss

dauer · 11-04-2005, 02:22 PM

immeasurable bliss
chunky brown chunks of chocolate
Sweet sweet laxative

(Edit: I just realized this could be read two ways. I meant it as in chocolate laxative.)

pohaikawahine · 11-04-2005, 03:22 PM

(ceil .... you are kind and good at this game, but how does one follow with ...

sweet sweet laxative
the choc-o-late kind
is there another?

Ciel · 11-04-2005, 04:14 PM

Is there another?
Baal of the earth rejoices
In union sublime

Awaiting_the_fifth · 11-05-2005, 10:49 AM

Sorry P, prehaps it was a bit innapropriate - subject wise, but I stand by my syllables,

Im - Mea - shra - ble - bliss

3 - nil - U - Ay - Fa - Cup - Win

Midd - Les - Bro - F - C

Ciel,

you are quite right of course, but until I reach my goal, Buddhists are allowed to like football too, and I did post it right after the game. I liked your follow up btw.

Meanwhile, back on topic...

In union sublime
my whole mind with the real world
sweet enlightenment

dauer · 11-08-2005, 06:48 PM

sweet enlightenment
Just like bullseye-ing womprats
Ain't got any proof

Ciel · 11-09-2005, 12:08 AM

ain't got any proof
'cept reflective quality
sudden clarity

11-03-2005, 05:10 AM	#31 (permalink)
pohaikawahine Elder Member Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 581	Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain lowers head and sighs tears begin to form and drop the flood begins soon

11-03-2005, 12:21 PM	#32 (permalink)
Ciel in essence Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Oxfordshire uk Posts: 835	Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain The flood begins soon Clouds rise high, enter sky space Laughter falls on earth

11-03-2005, 01:36 PM	#33 (permalink)
dauer Super Moderator Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: Near Boston Posts: 2,182	Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain laughter falls on earth colored leaves falling to earth Autumn winds blow them

11-03-2005, 02:16 PM	#34 (permalink)
Ciel in essence Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Oxfordshire uk Posts: 835	Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain Autumn winds blow them Spectral radiance unbound Illumination

11-03-2005, 04:44 PM	#35 (permalink)
pseudonymous General Member Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Oklahoma Posts: 239	Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain illumination the moment held forever my heart missed a beat

11-03-2005, 05:25 PM	#36 (permalink)
Ciel in essence Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Oxfordshire uk Posts: 835	Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain My heart missed a beat Magnificent magnitude Immeasurable bliss

11-04-2005, 10:28 AM	#37 (permalink)
Awaiting_the_fifth Where is my mind? Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Middlesbrough, UK Posts: 602	Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain Immeasurable bliss 3 - nil uefa cup win Middlesbrough FC ................... (sorry, I had to)

11-04-2005, 12:01 PM	#38 (permalink)
pseudonymous General Member Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Oklahoma Posts: 239	Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain awaiting the fifth...where is your mind? that was way off on syllables, and let's face it...a thread killer. since i started the thread, i vote to return to ceil's pseudo-haiku: My heart missed a beat Magnificent magnitude Immeasurable bliss

11-04-2005, 01:47 PM	#39 (permalink)
Ciel in essence Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Oxfordshire uk Posts: 835	Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain But interesting P, Awaiting the fifth why do these words create football reaction, when you seek the peace and the equisite. If I may I'll rearrange; Middlesbrough FC Zen mind game, equisite form Immeasurable bliss

11-04-2005, 02:22 PM	#40 (permalink)
dauer Super Moderator Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: Near Boston Posts: 2,182	Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain immeasurable bliss chunky brown chunks of chocolate Sweet sweet laxative (Edit: I just realized this could be read two ways. I meant it as in chocolate laxative.)

11-04-2005, 03:22 PM	#41 (permalink)
pohaikawahine Elder Member Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 581	Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain (ceil .... you are kind and good at this game, but how does one follow with ... sweet sweet laxative the choc-o-late kind is there another?

11-04-2005, 04:14 PM	#42 (permalink)
Ciel in essence Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Oxfordshire uk Posts: 835	Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain Is there another? Baal of the earth rejoices In union sublime

11-05-2005, 10:49 AM	#43 (permalink)
Awaiting_the_fifth Where is my mind? Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Middlesbrough, UK Posts: 602	Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain Sorry P, prehaps it was a bit innapropriate - subject wise, but I stand by my syllables, Im - Mea - shra - ble - bliss 3 - nil - U - Ay - Fa - Cup - Win Midd - Les - Bro - F - C Ciel, you are quite right of course, but until I reach my goal, Buddhists are allowed to like football too, and I did post it right after the game. I liked your follow up btw. Meanwhile, back on topic... In union sublime my whole mind with the real world sweet enlightenment

11-08-2005, 06:48 PM	#44 (permalink)
dauer Super Moderator Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: Near Boston Posts: 2,182	Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain sweet enlightenment Just like bullseye-ing womprats Ain't got any proof

11-09-2005, 12:08 AM	#45 (permalink)
Ciel in essence Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Oxfordshire uk Posts: 835	Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain ain't got any proof 'cept reflective quality sudden clarity

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