The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain - Page 15

flowperson · 07-29-2006, 11:45 PM

then see.......Ah this....Is
the bridge towards tomorrow
someone must be first

wil · 08-08-2006, 06:01 PM

someone must be first
consider... chicken or egg
question of ages

Ciel · 08-08-2006, 06:54 PM

Question of ages

Acid alkaline balance

In amniotic

flowperson · 08-09-2006, 02:01 AM

In Amniotic
Water... the future floats free
Tied to its mother

cavalier · 08-09-2006, 09:13 AM

Tied to its mother
and blind-folded, it bumps on
her ass when she stops.

wil · 08-09-2006, 04:18 PM

her ass when she stops
eats everything in reach
pressing on she brays

(that starter could be a whole thread on its own....)

flowperson · 08-10-2006, 12:36 AM

Pressing on she brays
Til the farmer smacks her head
With a blunted board

(think she's a Democrat ?)

seattlegal · 08-17-2006, 08:37 PM

With a blunted board
standing in as a trellis
vines climb towards the sun

flowperson · 08-18-2006, 01:12 AM

Vines climb towards the sun
Opening their blue trumpets
Beginning each day

InLove · 08-18-2006, 04:20 AM

Beginning each day
In reflection of the sky
Then bowing their heads

wil · 08-18-2006, 01:37 PM

Then bowing their heads
Ducking low flying aircraft
Soldiers thank the Lord.

InLove · 08-18-2006, 02:46 PM

Soldiers thank the Lord
And make their announcement new
Rhythm in blues time

flowperson · 08-19-2006, 12:46 AM

Rhythm in blues time
Marks down the cries of the heart
But just in twelve bars

Caimanson · 08-19-2006, 01:30 AM

But just in twelve bars
The prisoner stared the sky
And said where are you Lulu?

flowperson · 08-19-2006, 02:02 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Caimanson

But just in twelve bars
The prisoner stared the sky
And said where are you Lulu?

Sorry but this violates the 575 rule taught to me so well by wil when I came on the board. 1st line the last line of the previous post, 5 syllables. Second line, 7 syllables allowed. 3rd line only 5 syllables allowed again

Try again. It's easy once you get the hang of it.

flow....